---Red Lollipop

red lollipop on a toddler's soft cheek shattered jar

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Joe Maverick

Date: 9/25/2011 7:19:00 PM

Sorry debbie.. i was commenting on Andreas a minute ago.! and its late here.

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/25/2011 7:18:00 PM

Is this a hectic kitchen write Andrea..? you are making me think..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/25/2011 4:09:00 PM

Well, that reads like a sticky mess but fun if no one got hurt in the process..Thanks for stopping by..I baked a ham which I thought would be good for a few meals..Wrong thoughts..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2011 4:09:00 PM

I have found that a three and one-half pound beef roast is just a snack for my son..Sara

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/25/2011 1:47:00 AM

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2011 9:34:00 PM

YES. THis one is GREAT, Debs. I have seen the kids with candy stuck to their cheeks like this (or maybe it was me looking at myself in a mirror.hahaha)

Jeffry Cohan

Date: 9/24/2011 3:16:00 PM

I GOTTA SAY THIS FAST BECAUSE THEIRS A CHICK IN THIS ROOM WHO DOESN'T WANT TO BE BURDENED BY NOT HELPING A HALF-CRAZED POET...SO I SAY ABOUT THIS POEM WHAT I SAY ALL THE TIME..ONLY FREAKIN' YOU GOTTA RUN IN CASE THAT LADY WITH A TIMECLOCK APPEARS....u know i'm joking and all i can say is you are like one of a kind...THREE LINES AND MY EYES GOT WATERY...AN APPRECIATIVE FRIEND ~free cee!~ Phreepoetree ... posts, comments, contests, whether other people like yur stuph....that's not poetry it's roulette....it is if i like the poem see, poetry is not a constant23 contest!

Kash Poet

Date: 9/24/2011 11:10:00 AM

Yes I shattered too many candy jars!!Excellent Senryu here .Enjoyed.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/24/2011 10:47:00 AM

"Sweet", I just love this Senryu! Kids just love candy! Enjoyed!!