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Blue Sky On the Beach

gentle waves tiptoe ashore sandpipers scurrying away from the rippling tide sandcastles looming in the distance beach blanket knights and sand dune days radiant in the mid day sun shades of glistening brown and red and dark sunglasses a red and yellow kite gently dances in the midst of a gentle sea breeze shuffle on the shoreline as rays swim by sand dollar days and the slow rising tide sweet gentle rhythm of a rolling wave aqua blue waters to put your mind at ease and a blanket of blue with cotton candy clouds slowly drifting across the afternoon sky sands of time pass on the beach entry for beach poem contest- Blue on blue on blue subject : Beach

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Date: 1/4/2012 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Bill. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2011 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Bill. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2011 12:36:00 PM
A sunny portrait, treating all the senses. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Bill Lindenmuth
Date: 11/29/2011 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Daver, will make it a point to read some of your words
Date: 7/5/2011 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Bill in Francine's "Blue on blue on blue" contest. Love, Carol
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Bill Lindenmuth
Date: 7/5/2011 7:08:00 PM
Thanks carol, sorry about the delay in responding. I appreciate all your kind words. all of the other poems were so good, nice to be considered in such a prestigious grouping Love , Bill
Date: 7/1/2011 10:41:00 PM
wonderful collection of images....very reminiscent of beaches we all have seen....congratulations on you r win..Syd
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Bill Lindenmuth
Date: 7/5/2011 7:09:00 PM
Thanks Sidney, i will be sure to read more of your writings. There were definitely some great poems in that group all winners if you want my honest opinion
Date: 7/1/2011 8:22:00 PM
Congrats Bill on your super win first place spot for sky portion of contest luv.. amazing and awesome luv..
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Bill Lindenmuth
Date: 7/5/2011 7:11:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for your kind words, I am begining to feel like a worthy citizen here, some awesome writing from others, to be a winner is more then special, Hugs and Luv, Bill
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Francine Roberts
Date: 7/2/2011 8:51:00 AM
psst, it was the beach portion
Date: 7/1/2011 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations on this beauty that combined all the elements together for the contest!
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Bill Lindenmuth
Date: 7/5/2011 7:13:00 PM
Thanks ever so much andrea, it is really an honor to be considered let along picked, lots of great poems were submitted, you guys all make it very special providing the inspiration to do what we all enjoy
Date: 7/1/2011 4:42:00 PM
You know your beaches and This is a great winner. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Bill Lindenmuth
Date: 7/5/2011 7:21:00 PM
Thanks so very much Joyce, I am glad you enjoyed it as much as i did writing it. I commented earlier, i am feelin g more and more like a citizen here and I love thy Neighbors Love, Bill
Date: 7/1/2011 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations Bill, on your first place win in Francines contest with this beautiful poem on the beach, not an easy theme to write on but you did an amazing job of it~~
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Bill Lindenmuth
Date: 7/5/2011 7:25:00 PM
Thanks so very much Constance, great praise coming from an honored writer such as yourself. The more i write and submit here, the more comfortable i am feeling. People like you make this site a place where creativity thrives, and the ART of creating pictures, feelings , lives through smiles and kind words
Date: 7/1/2011 4:09:00 PM
wonderful entry for the "beach " portion of the contest, congrats on your 1st place win ( I hope you will enter many more contests , but read them all CAREFULLY as we all have our little idiosyncracies)
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Bill Lindenmuth
Date: 7/5/2011 7:28:00 PM
Thank you Francine, I appreciate all your help and guidance, I wasnt sure i had made the necessary changes on time. I twas a pleasure to be a part of it. From what i have been reading, the other entrants were all fantastic
Date: 6/29/2011 7:34:00 AM
more soup mail Bill
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Date: 6/29/2011 6:46:00 AM
thanks for your kind comments , you have soup mail
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Date: 6/28/2011 11:01:00 AM
wish we had a beach here, but just lake beaches, a great write, thank you for commenting on Fabulous Fifties and that is something about you watching Dial M for murder, i saw it at the movie when i was 12 in 1954, and it was in 3-D a great movie.
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:00:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Bill. It was a pleasure to read. Have a wonderful inspiration filled day my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 8:52:00 AM
wonderful depiction of my fav spot on Earth..the beach.. any beach.. Summer beach.. awesome imagery and if u add a blue reference or two and add blue in your title u can enter into the blue on blue on blue contest for Francine as this piece is really dynamic luv..
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Bill Lindenmuth
Date: 6/29/2011 5:16:00 AM
i may just go back and make a few changes, Thanks Linda - Marie !!!!!!!!

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