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I wish . . . I could go back in time go back, back to when I was a child full of happiness and pure joy to Christmas with my family before the sorrow . . . O, how I loved Christmas Day the cooking and decorating Mom fussing and Grandma dusting Dad entwining lights on the tree us children running all about before the sorrow . . . The fireplace crackling and glowing snow falling and Santa dreams dancing in my mind in the night my new kitten purring before the sorrow . . . ___________________________ Written, 2012 Submitted to the contest, Free Verse, A Poet Destroyer

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  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:50:00 AM
    This is sad and very touching. I feel for you. But as they say - lufe goes on. May God bless you always. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 12:27:00 PM
    enjoying this again, my friend - hope you are better soon x

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:08:00 PM
    I hear you..wishing you a Happy New Year and perhaps both of us can now put the holidays behind us until next year. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Constance , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:22:00 PM
    love this touching write, my friend - I know exactly how you feel. my friend -forgive me for reading just one poem tonight - will read more tomorrow - so much catching up to do. Happy New Year to you - hope you are much better now. Congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 11:34:00 PM
    Wow, this is a masterful and wondrous write my friend! You have amazed me with this incredible and spectacular poem! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening! I loved seeing such a well written piece as this one! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 3:45:00 PM
    One lovely wish, Constance. - I wish you a win for this poem. - HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! - // Anne-Lise :)