Get Your Premium Membership

Eros' Power

From afar I sense you. I sense your desire--burning in you. I sense your passion--burning into me. Your essence closes the space between us: floods the false reality that pretends, and takes command of sense--our bodies thus united, breathe as one, intertwine as one, creating love and lust as just mortality and the divine could reach into each other once and find a paradise. Time disappears, and such a love makes ridicule of history and presence-- nothing separates--your body hot, my manhood searing it-- our endless closing and abandoning, more real than any scene that might have been in heaven or hell, and should we reach the absolute, such climax would be incomplete; such night would reign forever. Here, my love. Here is our night; no one may steal it away. There is no coming day--just an eternal now. Inside you, I am god. Inside you, goddess, we are us, and as I pound your body with my own, filling it as you fill me with womanhood, a new reality, incapable of death, is ours! ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/6/2014 1:23:00 PM
This is a very powerful read...very beautiful in every way. I've been through trying to find your poem, coming up empty handed. Glad I got to read this one...along with some others. Thanks for visiting my work. As you...I write on a variety of themes, some spiritual...
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/6/2014 1:50:00 PM
Hi, Dean. I found and read it. I will post a comment there.
Ludden Avatar
Robert Ludden
Date: 5/6/2014 1:38:00 PM
Thanks. Don't know how to message you on this site, but here's my email address, and I can send it to you if you wish to respond that way...or message me here. -Dean (cembalo10@gmail.com)
Date: 4/22/2013 1:24:00 AM
No one may steal it away... A very sensual read.
Login to Reply
Ludden Avatar
Robert Ludden
Date: 4/8/2014 12:47:00 PM
Sensual it is. To steal? Well, if you like. -Dean

Book: Reflection on the Important Things