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False Alarm

shrill siren eye rolls no one heeds the car who cries wolf (Lune) 5-3-5 Syllables

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/8/2014 9:35:00 PM
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Congrats on your win!!!!
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 6/8/2014 8:00:00 PM
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nice win David...XOX...Linda
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Skat A
Date: 6/8/2014 7:57:00 AM
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HI DAVID,, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/2/2014 7:23:00 PM
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Okay I admit, I over thinked it, I was reading shrill siren, like a monsterous beast, then I didn't get where the car who cries wolf. then I realized you were talking about a car alarm and how people ignore the sound of it. Much applause, Your words played a vivid game, Well done on your win David :)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/2/2014 8:04:00 AM
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Congrats on the win!!!!1
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/2/2014 6:36:00 AM
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hi Dave fine poem congrats on win hugs
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/2/2014 12:29:00 AM
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Nicely done. Interesting anthromorphism. Happy to share the #1 spot with you.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/1/2014 4:01:00 PM
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mmmn witty write.. :D KUDOS!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/1/2014 11:13:00 AM
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Great write David n a deserved huge win ! Congrats!
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 6/1/2014 1:42:00 AM
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Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, david
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/31/2014 11:17:00 PM
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hey, this is cute and clever. Congrats on your great win.
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 5/31/2014 8:26:00 PM
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Congratulations. love,.Joyce
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/28/2014 7:54:00 AM
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well worded and descriptive.. lovely imagery, david.. huggs
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David Mohn
Date: 5/28/2014 3:26:00 PM
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Thank you Nette...I value your comments
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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 5/25/2014 11:02:00 AM
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Enjoyed
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David Mohn
Date: 5/25/2014 1:12:00 PM
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Thanks Muhammad...appreciate you stopping by

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