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A Path Together

~A Path Together ~ We Met. Love me,I cant I was never loved. Hold me,I cant I was never held. Talk to me,I cant nobody talked to me. Kiss me,I cant nobody kissed me. Walk with me,I cant nobody walked with me. Sleep with me,I cant nobody slept with me. Look at me,I cant see you I am blind. I will love you,I will hold you,I will talk to you, I will kiss you,I will walk with you,I will sleep with you, I cant look at you, as I am blind. Will you feel loved?I was waiting for you. Will you look at me?I already saw you, Will you hold my hand?Yes I will. Can you walk with me through our life's path together? Yes I will. I love you. Therese Bacha 5/8/2013 Contest for PD.....Any Love Poem.

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Bernard Colasurdo

Date: 5/11/2013 9:03:00 PM

Hi Terry, this is just a beautiful poem that touched my heart. I see you are entering and winning some contests I am so happy for you. keep up the great writings. Thank you for stopping by Beccas blog to wish me Birthday Wishes. Have a very Happy and Blessed Mums day tomorrow : )

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/11/2013 10:02:00 PM

Thank you my dearest Bernard. I always think of you even without writing. Thank you for the wishes of mothers day. Yes i have been filling my time in writing i feel connecting within myself. Take care, God bless you. Much Love Bernard. Terry xoxo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2013 8:47:00 PM

Terry, the poems are not suppose to be dedicated to me... the contest is a poem of the word APPRECIATION... In honor of me... He's honoring the contest to me,, NOT ABOUT ME... the poems entered in that contest have nothing to do with me.... and like wise, I'm not the kind of poet who writes dedications... you are so sweet in thinking the contest is about me. love, love~ LINDA

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/8/2013 9:13:00 PM

Thank you so much PD for answering back, i feel much better. You are a darling as usual. I will see how others will write , then maybe i can do the same. Love Love Terry xoxo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2013 4:00:00 PM

This is very nice Terry, .................. I added photos to my newest contest, i hope it helps you... xox~ LINDA

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/8/2013 4:12:00 PM

Whoa Whoa PD, unbelievable the pictures are amazing, how do you do that PD. You are always on top of everything, thank you so so much. Love Terry xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2013 9:50:00 AM

I like how you made this as if someone replying to negativity and to encourage the person to feel something they never felt before until in the end, we feel an awesome change!! Good one, dear lady!!

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/8/2013 10:17:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thank you so much. Have a beautiful day.....Love Terry xoxoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/7/2013 3:04:00 PM

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Therese Bacha
Date: 5/8/2013 10:18:00 AM

Thanks Anne, enjoy your holidays. Terry xooxox

Carl Fraser

Date: 5/6/2013 9:12:00 PM

These words scream off the page, i really like this one Terry, blessings,Carl

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/6/2013 9:28:00 PM

I am so happy you passed again to read my poem, thank you so much, it does encourage me to write more. Love Terry xo

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/6/2013 2:19:00 PM

Great poem. Some people are just born to be and walk together in the path of life. Thanks for sharing. I admire people like that. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla......Soupmail

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/6/2013 3:03:00 PM

Hi Lucy. Thank you for reading and liking this type of my new poem. Love Terry xoxoxo

Donna Jones

Date: 5/5/2013 10:09:00 PM

Hard to believe sometimes...this gives hope....

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/6/2013 5:39:00 AM

Hi Donna, dear friend always around when needed. Have a great day. Love Terry xoxo

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/5/2013 9:32:00 PM

I hope both of you are heading down the right path. Good write.

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/5/2013 9:43:00 PM

Thank you Robert for passing by. Good night. Terry xo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/5/2013 2:57:00 PM

This is lovely Terry... thank you for sharing... LINDA

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/5/2013 3:17:00 PM

Hi PD. I am glad you liked it busy woman always. Love Terry xoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/5/2013 12:21:00 PM

- Terry my friend, it's like a perfect wish list ..... but as we know is not all wishes come true - A lovely poem! - Wishing you a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/5/2013 3:14:00 PM

Hi Anne, you see i shut the TV off. You were so cute, i am glad you liked it Anne, I cherish your honesty and friendship. Love Terry xoxo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/5/2013 10:32:00 AM

Dear Terry, You are the winner, they the losers! For you have loved and they didn't! Their shame, Your glory! Beautiful!

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/5/2013 3:10:00 PM

Thank you so much. Have a beautiful wonderful week. Hope you enjoyed the holidays. Love Terry xo

Kash Poet

Date: 5/5/2013 10:27:00 AM

Oh,this is such a passionate poem from you Therese.Lovely read.Thanks for your inspiring words and for faving my poem.

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/5/2013 3:25:00 PM

Kash, i love your opinion, because i am just trying a different way, i am so lost if i can continue or not. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/4/2013 10:45:00 PM

You are writing some fantastic and wonderful poetry Therese! This write is so tremendous and I really love reading it over and over again, its so beautiful! I read it to my wife, she enjoyed it too! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/4/2013 11:17:00 PM

Hello my dear friend, thank you so so much, your encouragement helps me to improve myself. Thank you Russell, and thank your wife to. Good night. Happy dreams. Love Terry xoxo