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The Letter I

~Why The Letter I~ Why the letter "I" sometimes feels sad or happy. If I am downhearted I cannot feel happy. Why the letters "WE" sometimes feels strong or weak? If I am cheerless I cannot feel stronger. Why the letters "YOU" sometimes feels loved or hated. If I am depressed I cannot feel love. Why the letters "THEM" sometimes feels aggressive or connected. If I am sadden I cannot feel aggressive. Why the letters "OUR" sometimes feels love or possessive. If I am rejected I cannot feel any love or possessive.I will feel nothing. Why the letters "HIM" sometimes feels sexual or indifferent. If I am consumed I cannot feel sexual, I will feel indifferent. Why the letters "SHE" sometimes feels adored or betrayed. If I am crying I cannot feel adored, I will feel betrayed. Why the letters "ALL" sometimes feels friendship or abandoned. If I am unconscious I cannot feel friendly , but will feel abandoned. If I will erase ALL those words Will you let me Love You?. I already Love You. Therese Bacha 4/5/2013

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Harry Horsman

Date: 6/20/2013 3:02:00 PM

Hi Terry, this is so clever, and so poignant too

Therese Bacha
Date: 6/20/2013 3:56:00 PM

Hi Harry, hope yo are doing ok. Thank you for passing by. I did not write since a while. Feeling down lately, health wise. See u soon. Terry

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/29/2013 6:21:00 PM

nicely written Terry ;}

Therese Bacha
Date: 6/20/2013 3:54:00 PM

Hi Debbie, glad you liked it. Haven't been on the sight for a long time. You are fine. Love Terry

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/11/2013 2:53:00 PM

Just beautiful 'All' is my favourite..Unless someone feels abandoned of that :all:circle..All-sounds so beautiful..lovely thougts penned.Hope you are fine dear..i just returned from our holiday..

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/11/2013 3:02:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine, will see you later. Love Terry xoxoox

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/8/2013 12:51:00 PM

This is an excellent quill... Thanks for sharing.... Many thanks for the Fav. 5 Thumbs up ma ...AO

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/8/2013 1:06:00 PM

Thank so much young man, i loved reading it. Terry xo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2013 11:09:00 PM

terry, I agree with Anne down here. This is UNIQUE!! Very clever the way you went through the different pronouns! And what was even cooler, that last stanza. I just love how you ended with "I already love you!"

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/7/2013 8:02:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thank so much for passing by me, i am glad you liked it. Love Terry xoxoxo have a great day.

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/5/2013 9:34:00 PM

Another good one Therese.

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/5/2013 9:44:00 PM

Thank you again so much. Terry xo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/5/2013 12:30:00 PM

Terry, this is unique! - Love "puzzle game" .... - Very well done. - <3 U my friend!! - If you have time ...... read my "Love Letter" too! - Thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/5/2013 3:22:00 PM

Hi Anne, I already loved the heart picture of your love letter poem, thank you that you are here. I will try to put off the TV......i laugh every time i read it. Love your honesty. Love Terry xoxo

Joseph May

Date: 5/5/2013 12:17:00 PM

wonderful write Terry.....I like the last stanza..thanks so much for stopping by...

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/5/2013 3:20:00 PM

Hi again Joseph, so so happy you liked it, it is so new for me to write this kind of poem. Love Terry xo

Carl Fraser

Date: 5/4/2013 9:27:00 PM

A very strong message here Terry, love the style, great job, blessings Carl

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/4/2013 9:46:00 PM

Thank you Carl, I mean young man, its so nice to have your opinion, because i am new in those kinds of short poetry. Have a great Sunday. God Bless. Love Terry xoxo

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/4/2013 8:19:00 PM

This is quite the unique and intriguing write my friend! I really enjoyed this delightful poem, Therese! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/4/2013 8:41:00 PM

Thank you Russell, I am so glad you liked it, good night have a great day. Love Terry xoxo