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A misty reflection in the mirror of life a fragile shadow on the wall of boundaries A deep echo in the tunnel of thoughts A soft whisper in the voice of dreams a broken emotion in the beat of Hearts a flash back in nightmares of death a roller coaster in the subconscious of minds a thunder storm in the dilhema of soul a water mark in the shade of light an immersion of words in the baptism of truth an ultraviolet ray in a shattered prism of glass a moonless sky in a presumption of total eclipse a tempting apple in the garden of forbidness a white angel in the purity of lusty sin an ardent paramour in fervent yearning of passion a jealous lover in the destruction of love a stop watch in the moment of time a deep crack in the crust of the world an earthquake in the hot core of lava a forest path in a jungle of lions a gold circle in waterfalls of a crazy affair a wave of trust in the vast ocean of betrayal a soften glacier on the bedrock of seperation a chess game in the loss of forever a weeping petal of a wild daisy in last goodbye a big question mark on the edge of destiny. (3rd May 2010) Charma

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Date: 5/16/2010 7:23:00 AM
Fantastic write! JB
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Date: 5/11/2010 11:56:00 PM
"a weeping petal of a wild daisy in last goodbye... " this makes me weep for all the goodbyes of my loved ones
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Date: 5/8/2010 9:02:00 AM
beautiful write!!
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Date: 5/6/2010 8:16:00 AM
Hey Charma, Thnx for the comments on my writes..I appreciate them ..Jimmy
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Date: 5/5/2010 6:54:00 AM
Brilliant writing my friend! It's always a pleasure to read you dear Charma :)
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Date: 5/5/2010 2:34:00 AM
Charma excellent, they are always a pleasure to read, i love the ending on this . you can make a lot on the ending,..p.d.
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Date: 5/4/2010 7:21:00 AM
HI, Charma, I miss chatting lately too. So busy. I woke up super early to prepare mother day things to mail and still have only a little time for my soup comments. This post of yours really is nice.Some of these are quite profound. What made you decide to write this? It's very reflective. I enjoyed seeing these. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:33:00 PM
pearls of wisdom and observation!
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Date: 5/3/2010 5:42:00 PM
It's my fav. Wonderful expressions. I love it
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Date: 5/3/2010 2:51:00 PM
Well every verse/stanza/line has super meaning for me as well.. only the competition is Ron himself.. he fights him.. this is awesome.. a new fav of course.. and a deeply touching and though provoking write today... what are we both to do? I saw the comment about your Mom being named Maria also... but this is a great sign to me... maybe one day Italy in the future.. ...with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/3/2010 2:47:00 PM
Charma U R beyond my read, I loved the one you have on( Karma), the one about your bold hubby. Now enjoyed this one more. Always a pleasure to read your poetry,,IRMA
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Date: 5/3/2010 11:19:00 AM
Very nice, Charma!! I especially love the truth in the verse about the "chess game." That's what love seems to be sometimes. Great work! The meter and flow keep the poem moving at a pulse-pounding rate of passion. Love, Carolyn
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