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Soldiers Life Thread

                               Young men shipped out to the far east
                                    Their civil virgin is soon to be lost
                                      Replaced by a fighting beast

                                       In the midst of the battle
                             The sickening stench of human bloodshed
                                Fills the air of a once distant paradise
                                      Tortured minds,lost sainty
                                              Terrifying fears
                                      Tuned into surviving modus
                                  Endless cascades of hells` flames
                                  Licks the young soldiers`life thread
                                 Is there an end to all the madness?
                                 Can he ever be a loving man again?

                             Followed by the shadows of dead comrades
                               He returns to his family and loved ones
                      Like any man,he seeks back to his battlefield again
                   The war devil has got his clammy hand around his throat
                              Until his dying day,the war will continue
                                   Will he ever reach nirvana again?
                         He may never experience that moment again,
                        when inner peace sett the standard of comfort

           And the saddest part....someone just made a pail of money out of that war

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  1. Date: 7/27/2012 11:41:00 AM
    This must be tenth poem of yours I have clicked on. Can't find one I have not seen already but this one was sure a GOOD one!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 2:26:00 PM
    very good but sad write.

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 10:52:00 AM
    This is a sad but true write Arild; good to see a feature for you with it..) it can only be a good thing to keep putting out reality pieces like this i applaud your good words today..!

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 6:50:00 AM
    ha...did you say Orlando,...xool.. Congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice one...pd

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 7:28:00 PM
    Congrats on your featured poem, Arild. I'm glad I read this one tonight...sad but true. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 9:39:00 AM
    Enough to put one in deep depression. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 4:06:00 PM
    Congrats on having this one featured.

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 5:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Arild. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 7:23:00 PM
    Amazing how much the US will do for oil rich countries and turn their head on Sierra Leone and other nations suffering human atrocities. My brother is a disabled Nam vet. We protected oil rights and French rubber trees and the cost in human life was tremendous.

  1. Date: 1/7/2012 2:17:00 PM
    This is fantastic from beginning to end. Thanks for illuminating this poem for me to read. I can't even imagine how the soldiers' felt i these dark days but you painted a clear picture to allow me a slight idea. Excellent and sad point there at the end as well. Keep up the great work. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 7:53:00 PM
    CAn't seem to find a poem to comment to that I have not already seen. I came way down here though and saw your reply to my other comment I made here. Yes,it's really a disgrace. I can imagine you have seen some horrible things, Arild. Thanks for your comments on my poetry. I only wish you had a lot of poems for me to comment to you back on!!

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 4:59:00 PM
    A good poem to clearly stand up against war, Arild. i'm so thankful my son got out of the Marines right before things got bad over there. WE all need to remember these soldiers more than we do. Good for you to speak for them.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 12/22/2011 4:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea! I`ve witnessed post-traumatic stress at close range,and it isnt a pretty sight..the lack of serious follow up that lots of them meet when they`re finally out of that hell..that`s a shame and a disgrace.
  1. Date: 12/1/2011 11:36:00 PM
    You have touched on an understanding of mine within the lines of this poem Arild...i have the desire to create a novel hovever time is biggest enemy at the present:)

  1. Date: 11/29/2011 6:34:00 PM
    Such a thoughtful rhyme on war. Wouldn't you wonder how people can do it when they don't have anything against the person they are killing. War is so strange!

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 12/1/2011 12:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    indeed Elizabeth.Brings out the beast within the human species..Hugs
  1. Date: 11/26/2011 5:45:00 PM
    Thanks vie..strange really.We like to think that we have becomed civilized,yet still our leaders send young men out to kill and be killed in most savaged ways..Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 4:23:00 PM
    Enjoyed your war poem, it is said when great men die before their time. Hugs,vie

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 8:59:00 AM
    Lovely expressions very impressive, Arild