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Who What When Where Why Then there's room for a lie What makes the news? What makes the blues? What makes people the authority over who and how others pay dues? The endless struggle for world domination Pink and the Brain Their world is a piece of salt or grain It's the dashed on the map that separate boundaries Citizens who separate land, and carry mystical stories Who creates these stories? Those who want to conquer fear, worry There's those who work to eat and pay bills and take care of family At the end of the day they relax with their families happily There are those who work to make money beyond pure necessity Covering necessity, buy random stuff, Then want,mud, houses, clothing, and air Time to call a mans bluff, might end in dispear

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Date: 9/6/2013 4:41:00 AM
I used to love Pinky and the Brain, even when I didn't like cartoons anymore lol. It actually reminds me of some real life people, even family members, one hair-brained scheme to world domination, instead of just tiny efforts to make the world a better place. I think your poem says that wonderfully.
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Date: 9/4/2013 8:38:00 PM
Hi Sharon, Poignant write that arouses curiosity.. Ken
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Lynn Dolly
Date: 9/5/2013 12:31:00 AM
Thank you! Cheers, Sharon

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