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5 Month Love

5 MONTH LOVE Have you ever been in love? month 1 he was sent from above He came to me so soft and pure He made me feel alive and sure When I think of him I think "blue" So fresh, so clean and so brand new Nothing in this world touched him God sent him to me my special blessing Month 2 came a went so fast But I knew our love will last Month 3 would be a scare for me They said u may not stay with me I ignored their jealous chatter Because to me it did not matter Month 4 I laughed so hard I cried To feel u moving deep inside My heart so full of love it swelled For safe and sound I knew u dwelled Alas! month 5 had swiftly came I found myself alone again Why? Me oh my oh dear just mayby Anything something to save my baby But he got called back to god above At least I knew how to feel in love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/10/2016 7:27:00 PM
This poem brought teats to my eyes, being a fairly new Mom this could not be easy. Congrats, on POTD.
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Date: 9/15/2016 2:35:00 PM
Makayla, the way you have presented this outstanding piece adds to its poignancy. I am sorry for your loss. You still have a part of your infant saved forever in this moving poem. Congratulations on your deserving POTD! Blessings, Connie ; ) 7
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/16/2016 5:00:00 AM
Thank u so much
Date: 9/14/2016 3:06:00 AM
My wife's experience was bad enough at three months, five must have been devastating. You have my very best wishes for the future.
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/14/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thank you and I'm sorry for your loss
Date: 9/13/2016 5:51:00 AM
Ur love is well depicted. Nice poem on a sad event. God may bless u..........//:) hugs//Manmath//
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/13/2016 6:26:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/12/2016 5:08:00 PM
Sad write. Congrats, though, on POTD! ~Cindi~
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/12/2016 5:10:00 PM
Thank u
Date: 9/12/2016 4:00:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your charming little poem this long night, Makayla...Really quite lovely! My best regards. :) john
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/12/2016 4:02:00 PM
Thank u john
Date: 9/12/2016 3:41:00 PM
beautiful but sad Makayla congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/12/2016 3:43:00 PM
Thanks jan :)
Date: 9/12/2016 9:46:00 AM
Very touching!! Great job! Big hugs!
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/12/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thank u (hugg
Date: 9/12/2016 7:57:00 AM
So sad, but beautifully expressed!Congrats Makayia
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/12/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thank u soo much... Thanks for the encouragement
Date: 9/12/2016 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Makayla and welcome to poetry soup. Sad write! I will be looking forward to see more:)
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/12/2016 7:27:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/12/2016 6:45:00 AM
Very poignant Makayla and congrats on POTD; what a way to enter the soup. Namaste.
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/12/2016 7:15:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/12/2016 2:47:00 AM
- Makayla, welcome to Poetry Soup :) - Congratulations on your today's poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/12/2016 7:14:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/11/2016 6:17:00 PM
Makayle I got lost reading your poetry.Your poem made me feel that I was apart of it. I really did enjoyed reading your poem.
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Makayla Gilchrist
Date: 9/11/2016 8:54:00 PM
Thank you so much

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