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Out of my window Lines of ghost girls passing by The sparse mist

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 1:01:00 AM

LIKE THE HAIKU

Viviane Leite
Date: 2/16/2016 2:33:00 PM

Thank you, Linda.

Skat A

Date: 12/19/2015 6:12:00 PM

Hi Viviane, wow... creepy but awesome **SKAT**

Viviane Leite
Date: 2/16/2016 2:32:00 PM

Yes, SKAT you have no idea how creepy it can be! But also very beautiful Thanks for reading and commenting. Much obliged!

Jim Tidd

Date: 12/8/2015 9:20:00 AM

Long time between these / haiku of yours, hope you start / writing more often.

Viviane Leite
Date: 12/9/2015 6:49:00 AM

So you're the one who reads them, Jim Tidd. Much obliged. I'll do my best to post the things I scribble and to comment on other ppls posts. I like your haiku writing, quite snappy ... =)