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3DOM Questionku

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled 3DOM Questionku which was written by poet Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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3DOM Questionku

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Dial 3DOM#####¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤             Dial 3DOM
4, 5, 6 and ask:¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤            Dad and Mom, and ask:
Should I finish my task?¤¤¤¤¤¤¤            Did you finish your task?
Dial 3DOM####¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤              Dial 3DOM
4, 5, 6 and call:¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤              Dad or Mom and call:
Is it so essential?¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤              Why can Tom break the wall?
Dial 3DOM####@@@@¤¤¤¤¤¤              Dial 3DOM              
4, 5, 6 and... Say,####¤¤¤¤¤¤              Dad and Mom and... Say,
D'you think it's worth the day?¤             Is it so hard to stay?

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  1. Date: 5/5/2013 8:52:00 AM
    very imaginative!!! I enjoyed this.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 9:32:00 AM
    very nice poem my friend creative :) thanks for dropping by..have a nice day

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 6:52:00 AM
    Good morning Hanitra. Just wanted to drop by and say hello. I hope this greeting finds you well.

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 7:33:00 AM
    Hi Hanitra I was so moved by your visits yesterday. Your words are so kind and encouraging. I hope you are well. Hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 7:48:00 PM
    Hi Hanitra, Charles Atlas was a famous body builder in the 70s and his advertising was directed at adolescents who wanted to be muscular. His story was how the 90lb weakling could send away for his secret and in8 short weeks become a muscle man who would get all the girls. Thanks for visiting and commenting. It is always nice having a visit from you. Hugs Rick

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 10:10:00 AM
    amazing just amazing is this...

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 4:08:00 PM
    I never got Pink Floyd like my good friend did either. :)

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 4:27:00 PM
    Hi Hanitra, thanks so much for your visits today. you always make me smile. You may have to explain the above to me. it is very intresting to look at and it looks like you put a lot of thought into it.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/22/2013 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the insight, you are so creative. Have a wonderful day.
    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 3/21/2013 10:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ... And I put a little bit of what kids may think of schools and teachers and...Naughty Tom who never gets caught...And of course, it's about Dads and Moms' conception of freedom... Perhaps too many spices in the baking batch?! My question to the Question Man... Thanks for your visit! Love, Hanitra
    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 3/21/2013 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Uhh! Pretty tough to really explain, Rick! I'd better have the reaction of my readers about what they see, can see or want/choose to see. I tried to bake new cakes - especially for my new students, starting from your Questionku "regulations" and relating to the freedom of free verse; I added some Pink Floyd flavour: the "we don't need no education"-song from their album "The Wall"....
  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:17:00 PM
    You are so awesome at this...and I've seen a few holes in the wall too...great poem as well.