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30 Below

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30 Below

joy of frozen fun
spray fine mister in the sun
star spangled ice show!

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  1. Date: 10/24/2009 6:55:00 AM
    I don't know if I could stand to go outside in that. If I put on enough to keep warm, I probably would not be able to move. Soup mail. Keeping writing. Sara

  1. Date: 6/14/2009 12:46:00 PM
    Yeah, haikus rule; compressing a universal frame into 3 lines, withough missing a thing; shivers in my spine, needles and cylinders emerge from it due to the cold lines jojojo thanks for the experience!!=D

  1. Date: 6/13/2009 4:02:00 PM
    I like it, why do you call it 30 below?

  1. Date: 6/8/2009 2:07:00 PM
    Wow, a patriotic ice show awesome>James

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 4:01:00 PM
    I got the image in my mind =]

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 11:37:00 PM
    Lovely image Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 4/30/2009 3:58:00 PM
    I love the way you take a term that would typically be used for summer and insert it into your winter creation. Fantastic! Best of luck in the contest, James. Blessings, Donna

  1. Date: 4/29/2009 11:29:00 AM
    hey james nice poem.i love it.thanks for you help james.:-)

  1. Date: 4/26/2009 11:27:00 PM
    Bes wishes with this one Jim & thanks for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian Family history research ...another bonus from the internet I've found

  1. Date: 4/26/2009 12:35:00 PM
    Nice Haiku. A Deceptive form - it looks easier than it is to write them and you have done a good job here. Could use a little "frozen fun" today - it is a hot day in NYC. Peace Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 4/24/2009 6:05:00 PM
    What a wonderful image!! I am defiantley going to have to try this next winter...if it gets that cold next year of course! You are an awesome poet Jim! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 4/24/2009 3:06:00 PM
    Wow, love the image of a "star spangled ice show." Frozen fun is an awesome treat to young and old alike. Great work, James!

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 8:36:00 PM
    The joyous cold days of winter can be so beautiufl Well penned

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 7:01:00 AM
    Best of luck with this, Jim, a fine aurora borealis of a write.

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 12:56:00 PM
    didn't have much time here today,went to see grandma after work,but i had to see this one-wonderful,even better-star spangled ice show-wonderful haiku,you re so talented and thanks you re even a friend-charma;-)

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 5:50:00 PM
    brrrrrrrrrrr Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 1:14:00 PM
    Nice work James and best of luck if you decide to post...Raul

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 11:01:00 AM
    and good luck from my heart my friend,and just to let you know my friends marilyn and leonard who you prayed for when loosing their son are seeing a bit of light in their life coping much better now,thanks again-charma

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 10:59:00 AM
    what an amazing haiku-the frozen fun makes me think of a holiday in the snow,making snowmen,spray fine mister in the sun makes me think of a holiday in the bahamas or hawaii,and for you im sure its Minnesota with your girls-ice crystals flash stars!wonderful,you ve sent me in a good mood with your haiku and its going to my favs -charma

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 10:45:00 AM
    Frozen fun, frozen treat!Very nice and best of luck! Hugs, Robin~~

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