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i got to admit you got me this time
there's something falling away from me
the whispers in my ear are starting to get to me
you know the way that i feel
there's something broken in side my head
plucking heart strings left and right
six long years i was only 18 
the first time
i was the focus of her delight
no i'm not going to stop
it time to fight
it will feel so right
i'm not sure how but
i'm going to make you pay
not going to stop till i win the fight
till i can hear her sob
with a little spit in the eye
a merciful fate i will not deny

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  1. Date: 10/19/2010 9:31:00 AM
    strong write John, enjoyed your write,..P.D..