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i slipped, rocking, and crying, and shaking... but, you stayed by my side, till i could no longer cry... the blade was in my hand, and there were already four crimpson letters bleeding... but, you coaxed it out of my hand, so gently, till i fell to your chest unable to breath... you brushed my hair with your hand, kissed my tears so delicatly... again, you saved me, just like you always do... you whispered i love you in my ear, and i started to cry again... and, you held me like you thought you would break me... listening to you breath, and the steady beat in your chest, made me breath again... and, looking into your eyes, and seeing the love and worry, made me see... feeling your skin against mine, i wispered, your all that i need... you are my angel, my love, my only lover... when im alone or scared, you protect me and show me that your still here... if i slip again, i know ill fall into your arms... when i cry, your lips will kiss away the pain in my heart... i sit and trace the ink on your inner arm... i sit and trace my name over your heart... your name is etched into my soul, i just want you to know... even if i can never show it, the way i should, i love you... i see your halo, when no one else does... i fell, into your heart, rocking in your arms... i finnally know peace and love, oh, heaven resides in your arms... in your arms...

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Date: 1/19/2010 7:34:00 AM
Sometimes in darkness is when we finally find light this is a great write and as always your writting is always a plessure to read keep that pen flowing
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Date: 1/18/2010 7:19:00 PM
Quiet a fine write, you put a lot of feeling into this one...thanks on Life..Danny
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Date: 1/18/2010 4:16:00 PM
very powerful write....its one of my favorites! hope things get better for you and if you need to talk...hit me up anytime! ty so very much for the comment too
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Date: 1/18/2010 4:12:00 PM
Very good description of how it feels to be on the edge, I wish I could tell you which poetic form this drops into, but I'm fairly new to the terminology used.
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Date: 1/18/2010 1:27:00 PM
I was rereading your comment, thinking, and I realized what you meant. I don't think I share many of your pains. When I said I can relate, I meant someone I love hurts themself, and I try to be there for them
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Date: 1/18/2010 1:23:00 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you think I have potential, this is the first time I've ever posted any of my poetry, and thanks for the offer to talk. I have so many people to support me, and I hope you do too. :) Everyone messes up, but with enough love, we can get through it
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Date: 1/18/2010 12:26:00 PM
this one made me cry, i can somewhat relate, i really like it
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