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1-15-10 Commands

Smile. Laugh. Why must you command yourself? Dont cry. Dont show them your organs. Its all a lie, isnt it? The very fabrics of life. Do they see pain upon your face? Does the sadness seep through? Tears crystalize in your eyes. Your too brave to risk wiping them away, and not brave enough to let them pour. Blink them away. Good, you follow commands. Do you know how to be a leader? Do you close your eyes and walk? Trust me. Follow the sound of my voice. Will i lead you safely? Dont be so sure. We are all liars at our root. Push your self forward.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/19/2010 6:37:00 PM
Bravo! to each their own pulling up of socks! :)
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Date: 1/18/2010 4:19:00 PM
i so totally get this poem...its so true to me and my life.
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Date: 1/18/2010 8:04:00 AM
tis is really good rain keep it up!
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Date: 1/15/2010 3:53:00 PM
WOW. i love IT!!!!!
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