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I'm not going out tonight I hope you can forgive me I'll be by myself tonight where not anyone can see me no homework books or reading not tv, computers or guitar just me quietly thinking of the life I've lived so far 17 years I've been around and look what I have done nothing that exciting I was only having fun but in these 17 years I guess I've done somthing pretty cool I've been a sister and a daughter too and developed a life with you so tonight I'm not going to hide or sit up in my room tonight I'm going to celebrate 17 great years with you

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John Posey

Date: 10/22/2013 5:38:00 AM

What a positive piece!!!!! This displays wisdom beyond your years..... You have written with a very talented pen.... Keep in touch, my dear..... Jake

Anne Hessler
Date: 10/22/2013 9:56:00 AM

thank you i appreciate the complement

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2013 10:21:00 AM

Hi Anne, i'm saying this is a nice birthday poem for yourself... nice one...LINDA

Anne Hessler
Date: 10/22/2013 9:57:00 AM

thank you it was a good birthday anyway.

Jose Rodriguez

Date: 10/19/2013 11:04:00 PM

A very relatable piece when I was that age. Kudos. Keep up the writing:-)

Anne Hessler
Date: 10/22/2013 9:57:00 AM

i hope to thanx