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i met you when i was 17 so i wrote this poem when i was 17 because as soon as my eyes connected with yours there was immediate attraction, and not just a fixation for sexual sensation, but rather to take you to your favourite location for a special occasion like our first date and just listen, because i want to get to no you better, and i want to see you smile and be the reason you laugh, and when you feel under the wether id cook you breakfast in bed so you can be warm and well fed all together.

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John Ginesi

Date: 6/24/2013 4:00:00 AM

Hi Peter, This is well written but for two spelling errors, first (no should be know) and secondly (Id - I'd/ I would) the rest is perfect, you have improved a little since your first poem I read. all the best. John

Skat A

Date: 6/19/2013 7:49:00 AM

a lovely poem, sounds like your sweetheart.... LUV* SKAT

Peter Hoopert
Date: 6/19/2013 8:58:00 AM

hah yeah a little bit :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2013 6:03:00 PM

a swet poem.... much passion,,, here...thank you for sharing.. Linda