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12 commas

I saw your name, I started to smile
Turning left now, only two more miles
My toes were wiggling, at the thought of you
Sipping, squishing, tasting your delight
You're disappearing slowly, out of sight
Your name is intoxicating, so is your taste
You're to be sipped, not gulped down in haste
Pulling up, parking, taking out the key
Happy are my lips, hips, and ooh-my tummy

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  1. Date: 2/15/2012 8:19:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. This is a decently written poem.

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 5:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Tons Of Comma Fun" contest Adrienne. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 8:27:00 AM
    Great work. Congratulations on your 5th place win in Russell's contest...................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:16:00 AM
    ADRIENNE,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 12:00:00 PM
    What a fun piece. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 8:29:00 AM
    Congrats, Adrienne. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend. hugs Ralph

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 3:29:00 AM
    congrats, enjoyed this awesome winner. harry

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 5:36:00 PM
    Very descriptive and expressive work that is in the winners' cirlce..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Congrats on your winning work..Sara