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She is capricious which is why others alienate her A malignent tumor perspicious to all who that know her . Her friendships are usually transitory and often dissipate quickly due to her inurbane demeanour which also causes her to gravitate towards less than reputable characters. Fooled by their charm they would flatter her and time after time she would be their scapegoat

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Date: 9/15/2016 11:23:00 PM
Richard, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/13/2016 3:29:00 PM
Nice first post, Richard,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/13/2016 11:39:00 AM
Interesting piece. Visceral. Not sure what inspired it. I'll help myself to another... Welcome to Soup.
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Richard Dare
Date: 9/13/2016 11:42:00 AM
Hi Cyndi it was inspired by my sister , thanks for the comment .

Book: Shattered Sighs