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05-04-Xxxx

Yoda clever was right on cue And Obie did swell tae kwon do But one day unique In star wars double speak Must be "May the 4th" be with you

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2015 9:53:00 PM

haha, this is so CUTE. You are quite the limerist. Is that a word? I need to look it up because one day this week I intend to post a shrift about a limerist. But this spell check thing is telling me it's not a word! Limericist??

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/4/2013 2:41:00 PM

Don't know how I haven't read this one! Hah, all in all , I liked! Good job! Always, Laura

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/21/2013 12:50:00 PM

Love it Duke,,,,, tell me what May 4th is ;} my granddaughter just went to a b-day party on this past Saturday Star-wars theme. Thank you as always for reading my words "Glossy Blooms" I've been off line for 2 1/2 weeks. Power point on my cp was going out, thank you for stopping by ;}

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/19/2013 3:00:00 AM

Love the clever wit. Thanks for the chuckle. Well written :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2013 2:49:00 PM

How cute, Duke. and regarding the melancholy memory, you were right on both counts. My dad became impossible to live with for his schizophrenia, not very treatable in the 50's, so my mom left WAshington and returned to the farm where she was raised in Iowa.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/15/2013 12:06:00 PM

Thith ith a very clever uth of wordth... Terry (another great limerick!)

Debra Squyres

Date: 5/14/2013 4:44:00 PM

Clever write !!! May the 4th be with you !!! Love it !!! All smiles !! Thanks for dropping by... our flaws, though we dislike them, are part of who we are. I have many I dislike also !! And yes, Southern lady here ... Louisiana !!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2013 4:38:00 PM

Hello Duke, i love Yoda, i have the force on my side... :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2013 3:26:00 PM

Thank you ...... it's night here in Norway now .... I go to bed with a smile on my lips. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)