.a Heart Outlined In Steel.

A heart outlined in steel. Designed just so i'll never feel. It's way too late to get off this ride. There's no one in which I can confide. Falling down. The screams like thunder. Into lost dreams and lies I plunder.

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Brittany Moon

Date: 4/29/2010 12:43:00 PM

this is a very deep poem...i am amazed at your talent for poetry...i absolutely love dark poetry, and i can say that you're not only good, but also you're GREAT!!!...fav poem and fav poet...lol...God Bless and keep up the great dark creativity...~Brittany~

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/16/2009 6:13:00 AM

did you read my autobiography? lol. wow. you touch a place that many are afraid to go. this is what makes poetry special.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/16/2008 7:18:00 AM

This is a very powerful write my friend. I can feel the strength in the words.

Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/15/2008 10:32:00 AM

I can relate to this one so well. I feel the same way...Great write...read some of my poems and let me know what you think... *Breana