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...."The Wedding At Dreamendon" ~

Dressing the ancient stars amid their anthem weddings attire....

The universe anxiously anticipating these adorned galaxies of, anew ~

Bookplate bridesmaids, with such glittering eyes and broadening smiles

Quickly making their jubilant ways down, the amendable aisles

With a world beholding as, the best of man.... 

Hearkening hearts rejoicing so, very deeply inside; paradise

Standing at the altar aside, the most beautiful of glorious grooms ~

Wearing heavens luminous harvest moon colours; commencing halos

Visages, as a sparkling fireworks display afore the joys of an innocent, awestruck child....

Immaculate and pristine; these most mesmerizing of scenes

Cygnus, gathered here to unite this day, paladin unto the morn ~

Extenuatings pragmatic veil; crimsons silkened tides now torn

From, the final pages of such history and lore; a candid, jewel leavened door....

Prismatics band; lifting these velvet promises of an everlasting rainbows, I do ~

Sidereals notes of well-nigh chime; sweet music across the blue made skies

Church bells, reaching unto the furthest realms this, celebrations invitation

Come one come all; come as you were come as you are; the brightest star

Making their way through the constellations; jubilee, and all of creation ~

Coterie, disembarking at the depot from a waking moment; neverendings, final destination!?


...."The Wedding, at Dreamendon" ~

Note: Smile ~ "Merry Christmas Everyone; May It Be 'Beautiful & Bright; Love,'" John!:) ~

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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:07:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:38:00 PM
    John, I had to come back to savor the richness of this Wonderful poem! You are special...but you already know that. I pray that you're well and taking good care of your self! Much love, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/30/2010 2:11:00 AM
    this gem seems like a wedding of angels. .beautiful life would be if it had this view in daily reality. .beautiful poem John. .bravo!

  1. Date: 12/28/2010 6:51:00 AM
    A wonderous event, John. Full of twinkling imagery and cosmic symbolism. Not a costume ball, for sure, no preening nor fussing "come as you were come as you are".:) God's blessings to you, John. Love to you, Mikki

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 9:40:00 AM
    a wedding upon ancient stars sounds like a phenomenal & peaceful.that only a true love would be able to take part in. so deep, sometimes only felt in a dream. a favorite of mine. take care, John(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 6:28:00 PM
    Merry Christmas, again, dear John! Glad I took this time to come check out PS! And I found this exquisite poem to read...full of wondrous imagery and flow....Beautiful enough to bring tears! That glorious day on which the Bridegroom takes His Bride, you've captured in your great imagination! Goest to my Favs.' List. Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 3:57:00 PM
    Hi John. I am honoured that you commented on my poem. Started off as a Christmas message to friends in Australia but as usual my mind won't allow my hand to do as it wants. This is a fantastic eloquent write with words crafted together to form a whole. Far to good for me to even attempt to comment. Suffice to say that I enjoyed it and would aim to such heights. joy and peace to you and yours. Eamon

  1. Date: 12/24/2010 11:40:00 PM
    i am awestruck with the beautiful strains of melody and imagery of this dreamy work, john.. a wonderful christmas offering!! happy, blessed holidays!! thanks for sharing... :) warmest, nette