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"!Jeremiah?"

Apothegms baroque balcony of marvels.... Fauvisms fallacious face of fate, this faith has somehow now become But a hiero glyphic stumbling block for many, so it seems to be A prop upon the stages of these casting calls; their destiny? Peering beyond this archaically fashioned premordial symposiums veil Rogues mise en scene spiel prisms of such, mystique tales.... ....Sanguine concord hearts, left to unfold!? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Jeremiah" ~

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Audrey Haick

Date: 11/3/2010 12:41:00 PM

Warm congratulations on your featured poem on this week on Soup. Always...Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2010 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week John. Love, Carol

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 10/30/2010 8:38:00 AM

Wow...I read your comments...one pricked my attention. How many morcels are in a bag of M&Ms. If they were peanuts...t'would be more of a challenge? All nonsense said, it seems as though you're questioning fate? I'm confused. Destiny's "mise on scene", can be one more challenging. However Faith will always give things their place. Thinking back to bonbons, I'd better head out to buy some. God bless you and yours!! Love to you, John Rhinem, Mikki

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/28/2010 3:49:00 AM

Dear John,How are you?I read your poem once and twice. .but i need more wisdom to understand,i get that there is an elegant balcony,there is a face of faith,which somehow by time it would be shown. .i dnt think i got it all,i tried :)great poetry John!Celene!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/26/2010 4:29:00 PM

vocabulary? Like the colours of M&Ms more than I know :-) kidding . wow breathtaking John I always love your poetry. it's uplifting has a sense of warmth too them.

De R

Date: 10/26/2010 9:51:00 AM

Just came to check on your new poem, John. I had to look in the dictionary for some words...you really have a rich vocabulary. I have to read this again...just a minute...I think you are talking about Jeremiah, the prophet. An about faith in God...and you are wondering if we there really is such a thing as fate or not? That's what I got from your write, my dear John. Cont:)

De R

Date: 10/26/2010 9:51:00 AM

Maybe I couldn't understand the whole message, but this is quite interesting and you have a unique way of writing.:) PS:I'm really glad to hear you are doing well and I hope you will stay that way.

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/25/2010 11:16:00 AM

If I understand this correctly, dear John, then I would say, if theirs is just a prop, for playing a "part"....being pretentious, then it's just too sad for there will be a day of reckoning. Truth will always arise no matter how the attempts to disguise it or bury it. Our Lord said, let the weeds grow too until the day of His harvest when all the weeds will be collected and and be done with. If I'm wrong then forgive me.. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2010 10:14:00 PM

Hi, John, well, golly, this sure has a lot of alliteration in it! Love that baroque balcony line and the hiero gliphic stumbling block. Not sure I quite got the full meaning of your poem here, but I sure enjoyed the sounds of the words. Luv, Andrea