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Barred Basis

Sky's lefts bygone when there's not enough clouds
For her every color's soul to change in—
A motionless mime with no body shroud
For singe of sun, pleasure of moon, on skin;
No silver lines to join in morning vows—
And stars only cross themselves by heaven.
When she's in the midst being sensed and had—
She's still in wait for rain's approaching dash.

None of water's everywhere-ring to hear,
Image of diamonds of the destroyed piece
Of myself spitting upon it to clear—
In secondhand wells, top of trees I see;
Shadows facing up to belie my tears
Will fill the sky, as their lust ceases be
Where she spills over to become a bride—
And it seems I am tore out of the sky.

Copyright © Paige Hind | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 5/30/2024 5:29:00 PM

fascinating imagery, Paige, and evocative, descriptive lines. These lines spoke to me:A motionless mime with no body shroud For singe of sun, pleasure of moon, on skin; I also liked: "in secondhand wells, top of trees I see; shadows facing up..." Wishing you a pleasant evening, dear Paige.
Date: 5/30/2024 9:27:00 AM

Dear Paige, your poem is stunning! The imagery of the sky and its emotions is captivating, and I love how you blend nature and feeling together. The lines about the motionless mime and waiting for rain are particularly evocative. I also love the way you describe the interplay of light and shadow is beautiful and deeply moving. Amazing work! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/30/2024 8:41:00 AM

A flowing poem. Now "she becomes a bride" doth one object? My brain is energized to the words.
Date: 5/30/2024 7:24:00 AM

Dear Paige, soulful poetess, it's been a while since my imagination has melted into your imagery. This poem offers intriguing imagery and dramatic metaphors. I'm especially struck by "A motionless mime with no body shroud" and "No silver lines to join in morning vows" and your last impactful line "And it seems I am torn out of the sky." Wow! Such emotive and evocative writing! A stunning, dynamic piece, my poetry friend. It's what I've come to expect from you, brilliant poetry with heart and artistry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 5/30/2024 5:45:00 AM

A motionless mime with no body shroud… No silver lines to join in morning vows… In secondhand wells, top of trees I see…Such an interesting piece! …for her every color’s soul to change in…being torn from the sky, at the end. Emotive write! Hugs, Paige ~ Kim
Date: 5/29/2024 10:43:00 PM

Some strong and beautiful images in this one, Paige

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